wine-dark memory

from: lysergic stamp generator + mazzy’s comment + various poets writing on death (including Richard Hugo, Patricia Young, Thomas Lynch, Mary Sumway, Anna Akhamtova, Lawrence Durell, Jaan Kaplinski, Primo Levi, Phillip Levine, Susan Musgrave, Andrei Voznesensky, Ranier Marie Rilke, Seamus Heaney, Wislawa Szyborska, Elizabeth Smart, Louise Gluck, Tony Cosier and Dylan Thomas)

flash source: alter.fla (594KB)

[tags]vispo, visual poetry[/tags]

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18 responses to “wine-dark memory”

  1. avatar babel Says:

    ooh that’s lovely, layered dark memories crack and decay

  2. avatar babel Says:

    ooh that’s lovely, layered dark memories crack and decay

  3. avatar crissxross Says:

    the fragments oh you, oh you the being
    the quivering for the gift
    the crude jokes to draw, to draw out the other side
    the dust elevated into the erotic
    the ashes amid the truant vine
    the bones in search of a ruin of stones
    the piper in accordance with the darkness underfoot
    an irreversible innocence greeted by a wine-dark universe
    these words in search of your absence
    my masked heart snatched away by the fantastic distance

  4. avatar crissxross Says:

    the fragments oh you, oh you the being
    the quivering for the gift
    the crude jokes to draw, to draw out the other side
    the dust elevated into the erotic
    the ashes amid the truant vine
    the bones in search of a ruin of stones
    the piper in accordance with the darkness underfoot
    an irreversible innocence greeted by a wine-dark universe
    these words in search of your absence
    my masked heart snatched away by the fantastic distance

  5. avatar carmen Says:

    a death love poem….casual wind, Basho…. a poem written near the time of your own love death…. you, drowsy witness…
    take care, my friend, the poem should be graceful, natural, and about neutral emotions adhering to the old teachings of Purple Mist …mind, it is rude to mention lovedeath explicitly: use metaphoric references… the gentle breast, bedlinens or the deadly warmth ….truant vines or………anyway, suggest the transience of lovelife, dear Basho…
    you know, it’s a once-in-a-lifetime event… and as the time passes, changes might take place in a person’s life and the poem could often be rewritten….

    good, you’ve re-written all the sentences……good….do it again and again…

    see ?? all your words became reversible and receptive, my son….. reversible and receptive…

  6. avatar carmen Says:

    a death love poem….casual wind, Basho…. a poem written near the time of your own love death…. you, drowsy witness…
    take care, my friend, the poem should be graceful, natural, and about neutral emotions adhering to the old teachings of Purple Mist …mind, it is rude to mention lovedeath explicitly: use metaphoric references… the gentle breast, bedlinens or the deadly warmth ….truant vines or………anyway, suggest the transience of lovelife, dear Basho…
    you know, it’s a once-in-a-lifetime event… and as the time passes, changes might take place in a person’s life and the poem could often be rewritten….

    good, you’ve re-written all the sentences……good….do it again and again…

    see ?? all your words became reversible and receptive, my son….. reversible and receptive…

  7. avatar Matina Says:

    neat-o
    supple
    crevices

  8. avatar Matina Says:

    neat-o
    supple
    crevices

  9. avatar crissxross Says:

    when the words are dynamic
    the gaze penetrates and stills them

  10. avatar crissxross Says:

    when the words are dynamic
    the gaze penetrates and stills them

  11. avatar runran Says:

    it seems true in this case

    babel said said to trust the random,
    but it’s not easy for old school poets

    the melding seems to work here
    thanks to babel’s lovely clean script

    >:r

  12. avatar runran Says:

    it seems true in this case

    babel said said to trust the random,
    but it’s not easy for old school poets

    the melding seems to work here
    thanks to babel’s lovely clean script

    >:r

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